PART 2: “Dad, help her!”

“Dad, help her!”

Older Boy crying:

“She’s the only one who cares!”

Camera WHIP-PAN → father bursting through doorway, sprinting fast.

He drops to his knees beside her, lifts her face with shaking hands.

Whispers desperately:

“Helena…”

Sudden silence hits.

Both boys freeze.

They stare at each other. Something wrong.

Camera PUSH-IN — a gold locket slips from Helena’s neck onto the floor.

Younger Boy grabs it fast. Opens it.

Inside: old black-and-white photo of father, younger, smiling beside a bridge.

Boy whispers:

“Dad…”

Father goes pale instantly.

Older Boy raises the locket, voice shaking:

“Why does Helena have your picture?”

💣 ESCALATION

Helena’s eyes flicker open. Weak panic.

“No…”

Too late.

A folded paper slips from the locket.

Younger Boy unfolds it with trembling hands.

Paper crackles loudly.

Reads aloud:

“Baby Boy A…”

Looks up, voice breaking:

“It has my birthday.”

⚡ FINAL SHOCK

Camera CRASH-ZOOMS into father’s shattered face.

Breath gone.

Color drained.

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